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2014-08-20 15:21:14
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2014-08-20 17:20:23
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2014-08-20 19:17:57
4     ÀÌÀ±Áø Àú ±Ô¸®¿¹¿ä,
Thanks to this great editing, teacher ^^
I can write wrong in this comment, but I hope you get the message that I want to tell you.
I was so sleepy in mother's educational institute..
Even I can't understand some sentences why I wrote that way..!
I'll write a letter to Dobby again, thanks Katherine teacher 
2014-08-20 23:47:39
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2014-08-21 03:00:58
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2014-08-21 06:12:10
7     Katherine»ù Hi, Curi.
As we all know, writing is one of the hardest thing to master.
Even English majors make mistake when it comes to grammars and spellings.
I heard from teacher Kimberly that you have improved tremendously and
it's great to see that you have no fear when it comes to expressing your ideas.
You have to be fearless when learning new things and never get discouraged
but improve from your mistakes. I see lots of potential in your writing and I believe
you will become better and better each day. Good luck ^^
2014-08-21 10:15:43
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2014-08-21 21:23:26

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